Reviews for Lies
handle187 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
Some people

Smile more than others

Tell better stories around campfire

Are more fun to watch movies around

Enjoy themselves a little better at the video arcade

Caught up in the power of their own youth

They cannot tell fact from fiction

And seem to lack empathy

Whenever it becomes

Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
hmm. rather reminds me of some 'friends' i used to have. one thing though, the poisoned venom is redundant. kinda. thought they're different things. it sort of makes the end fell heavy. spiders are venomous, not poisonous ;)
hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Great imagery and I love the comparison!

cio, hoellenwauwau
soulspring chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
wonderfully descriptive with excellent word choice...
Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
Hn, very interesting. I like it...

... hn, I rarely ever give constructive criticism, neh? *smirks* Although, to be honest, I usually don't see anything to criticize...
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
wonderful piece! great comparison, i like this a lot. powerful, great message, very insightful. great job! keep on writing!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
Good way to put it.

~Heart of the Sword
the cute lil dead girl chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
nice one..)

did u know if a spider made a spider web that was on the sice of a pencil it could probably stop a boeng 747(thats a plane) in the air? ..