|Reviews for Lies|
| handle187 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
Smile more than others
Tell better stories around campfire
Are more fun to watch movies around
Enjoy themselves a little better at the video arcade
Caught up in the power of their own youth
They cannot tell fact from fiction
And seem to lack empathy
Whenever it becomes
| Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
hmm. rather reminds me of some 'friends' i used to have. one thing though, the poisoned venom is redundant. kinda. thought they're different things. it sort of makes the end fell heavy. spiders are venomous, not poisonous ;)
| hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Great imagery and I love the comparison!
| soulspring chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
wonderfully descriptive with excellent word choice...
| Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
Hn, very interesting. I like it...
... hn, I rarely ever give constructive criticism, neh? *smirks* Although, to be honest, I usually don't see anything to criticize...
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
wonderful piece! great comparison, i like this a lot. powerful, great message, very insightful. great job! keep on writing!
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
Good way to put it.
Heart of the Sword
| the cute lil dead girl chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
did u know if a spider made a spider web that was on the sice of a pencil it could probably stop a boeng 747(thats a plane) in the air? ..