Reviews for Kite Day
Storysmith chapter 2 . 7/6/2003
Kinda weird. The only things that make me doubt the authenticty are the things like a ten year old paying such attention to surroundings adn the asylum part. But then again, It could be just me not thinming. Three years ago I might have noticed places adn the asylum was just cliche. But over all, I say it is pretty convincing. Especially with my dream about the guy, and then seeing him the next day at church. I know the shocked feeling. Cool though. Well, l8er!

angrygrl chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Well, I can tell you this. I once was staying at my grandma's when I had a dream one night about how i was in a tornado. The next day towards the middle of the afternoon, we had a tornado warning and within a mile from us a tornado struck, but luckily never hit us. And every now and then I'll be listening to the radio and things will pop into my head before the person actually says them or sometimes I know what songs are going to play next because they start replaying in my mind. It's very odd and happenes to me at least every day so its become a normal part of my life. I mostly see things in my dreams though. I'll give you another example. I had a dream that 2 of my friends vomited. The next day at school I questioned them about it and they both said that they had had stomach aches during the time of my dream. So I dunno what to call it, whether its precognition or some kind of psychic thing, please anyone who views this let me know. It would be really nice to know why I'm such a freak :-)
poisonous chapter 2 . 7/6/2003
that was good. well written. write some more i want to know what else happens :)
kirsten was chapter 2 . 7/6/2003
Woah. Do you see major things, or just little things like things breaking?