Reviews for Take me
Icthoid Matro Coselos chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
*sigh* ahh... now that feels good! I loved the rhyming... it was flawless! even the rythm was good. If you want to hear a more storylike picture of this... read my "Extreme repreive in this haven" (you may just like it!)
Cobain88 chapter 1 . 6/26/2004
Wonderful poem.
krystalpendragon chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
so good, i loved it, nothing much else to say, it's just good. P.S. if you get taken to that place, then take me with you _.
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
such a good poem! i really like it! ah, take me with you!
tinybuterfly chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
Good Job! keep on'
Anich chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
now this was a cool one
Keeper of the Key chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Wouldn't it be great if a place like that really existed? I like the last verse ;)
GoldMetalGymnast chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
This is also a great poem! I think everyone; besides myself; wishes they could be in this place!

-awesome job!

your friend, GoldMetalGymnast
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
I liked this. It does sound like a great place.

~Heart of the Sword
Bekll chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
It's very poetic... um, if the sun was out shining all the time then there WILL be starvation from the plants (no rain). And without rain, where do the rainbows come from? This is a weird poem. But very nice, and comforting...
C. Hoogkamer chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
hmm hmm i like it! the rhyming was good and the idea is very common amoung all people (what most ppl want)... thanks for reviweing my haiku poem.. keep writing!