Reviews for Risible
Sivart chapter 1 . 7/23/2003
excellent good sense of emotion in it and great veiw of God

Sivart
yellow1 chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
i could be being dumb here but i dont really get this... you seem all the way to be rejecting the whole idea and at the end you say 'God welcomes you'. i was just wondering if u genuinely mean that or if it's a cynical/sarcastic kind of thing, so if u could clear that up for me, that'd be great. either way tho, i really like this poem, apart from me gettin confused over the last line you've written it really well and express yourself in a good way, well done you :0)