I enjoyed reading this story. It is obvious Sarah had a lot of growing up to do. I also think part of her lack of self-awareness is due to her absentee parents. You touched on them briefly, but I think the person or people who complained about her actions not being realistic never caught on as to why she was so indecisive, impulsive and selfish. Good read and on to the sequel.

So basically when John cheated on Laura it was ok but he gets cheated on its unforgivable. And the whole Chad thing: "I let you kiss me" and "it doesn't mean anything to me"...it just goes to show men are full of crap. Lmao

Hey you should read this chapter over again cause it has a few grammar mistakes...just letting you know. Other than that, awesome job, loving it more and more with each chapter that I read.

Hey I love this story, you did an amazing job with it. I really like how you add just enough detail to make someone feel and truly understand what Sarah is feeling.

Amazing story so far, can't wait to continue, just thought I'd stop to tell you how enthralled I am into it first, :)

okay one thing that I found kinda wierd was at the end of the chap when Chad's saying he talked to Laura and stuff and after he say's that he's going to go out with her so that she doesn't annoy Sarah well... Sarah's reaction was really crappy, I mean, this guy is giving himself kind of and going out on a date with a girl for her on her behalf andall she has to say is "well, thanks"? I mean, it was kinda lame! Couldn't she be a little bit more grateful? anyway, I'm off to see what happens next )

It's interesting but sometimes I can't tell who's saying what and then I have o backtrack. but the characters are cool!

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like it

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Hi...I'm really enjoying reading this..Could u possibly send me the original version? I'm really curious to see how it changed..

First off, I just wanted to tell you how much I'm enjoying your story, I just started reading it this morning, and that I think contrary to a lot of other fics on the site, yours is one of the more realistic ones. I'm not a huge fan of the main character being flawless. :) Anyways, I know you've already edited this once, but just pointing out something that I've noticed throughout the first 14 chapters, is that you tend to use "too" when it's supposed to be "to". So yea, if you ever decide to edit this again, please keep in mind to change most of the "too"s into "to"s. :) That's all! Going to finish the rest of the story now. :)

Great job, I really liked your story. :)

Sarah DID tell Chad. I remember reading her telling him. :P

I liked your first chapter, it was simple and to the point. It didn't bore me and I think you did a really good job. :)

I honestly liked the story. I really and truly did. But I thought Sarah was a bit...I don't know. Indesicive? At first, I thought she was really nice and confused because she liked Chad even when she had a boyfriend. But then, as it went on, she got to be a little witch-ier. Personally, I don't blame Chad for not wanting her in the end.