Reviews for Innocence
Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
Simply lovely haiku. I really liked it too. Excellent work.
*AbunaiChikara
Ps. Thank you so much for reviewing "The Piano". It was very much appreciated.
handle187 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
I think the title had a lot to do with the effect of the poem, I must admit. Anyway, that was good stuff.
The Teaspoon Faery chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
This is a wonderful haiku - a beautiful image. Thanks for reviewing my piece, too! You're going on my fave authors list :-)
hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Wow this is awesome! And very hard to understand, too. Loved it!

cio, hoellenwauwau
Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Awesome haiku! You're really good at this... keep it up!
soulspring chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
such a beautiful image... love the title! awesome work.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
That is such a sweet image. Many people relate doves to purity, so everyone should be able to get this.

Heart of the Sword
Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
I only wish I could write half as well as you. How beautiful...