Yeah, just throw all of your problems onto God, as if he doesn't have enough already

:o)

seriousley though, nice poem. I know the types of people you're describing, some keep it in, some show it off.

Another excellent piece. It flows perfectly, it's got a wonderful message...need I say more? Brilliant.

good song. I liked it. So true.

Excellent! Love the imagery!

Whoa, your really good. Smells like talent. Great job. Keep going.

Beautiful poem with a meaningful message. (I must find another word for beautiful and meaningful, lol) This has got to be one of my favourite pieces of yours. Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*

~ I really really love this! You really give great hopes to others. What would they do without you? You're just so encouraging and inspiring.

c. butterfly~**

i liked the message! again, a very powerful poem..

Beautiful. What strenth could be greater than that of God? Give yourself to Him, and He will give Himself to you.

It's very refreshing to read a good poet on this website. You've been added to my favorites.

You can write such inspiring and fulfilling poems. Thanks for posting this. Keep up good work!

Who! This is good. Reminds me that we are all part of God and that we should do our best to give our tides.

-Remm Farr

"It is the devil's work, and if it sees Jesus in you, then and only then will it truly know fear." - "The Oath" - Frank Perretti

earthly angel with a heart of the sword...hm...

nice work man.

Qasim

that's a nice metaphor. this was great. keep writing0)

Ps. you can put my name on that petition too...

It's more like a prayer than a poem - is that what you were going for? Probably, since you put it in the religion section. ; Even then, it still works as a poem.

I am not a religious person at all, but I wanted to read some more of your works because I think you're a good writer. I don't agree with you, but I must say you executed your poem well and you wrote about it passionately. Good job in supporting what you believe in. Don't let people try to take it from you - it's yours, no matter what.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw

You are an amazing poet. I love your work, and really love this poem.