| Reviews for Empty Pockets |
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   Blessed Sacrament chapter 1 . 7/9/2003 Beautiful poem, it touched me. Keep writing for God! |
| Traced In Green chapter 1 . 7/9/2003 Wow. That was a beautiful poem, I loved it! luvs Young'n'HopelessKid |
| Mime chapter 1 . 7/9/2003 I like how you compare having "empty pokets" to being unburden. Also, you second stanza reminds me of something my friend told me once: "When success goes to someone's head, it usually finds nothing there." Fabulous work! |
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 7/9/2003 so true! so very true! I loved it. there was a strenth to it that felt so, incredible. A hope that was ever present. awesome poem. write on! |
| Needa S chapter 1 . 7/8/2003 Wow..Wonderful..Outstanding piece... Loved it very much! |
| Scarlett Red Rose chapter 1 . 7/8/2003 "For He is strong enough to take it away And only with His strength can I go on." Once again, loved it. Especially that last part that I quoted. So true... |
| C.G chapter 1 . 7/8/2003 Great job.I love to read everything you write because I know I will enjoy bless you! |
| midary chapter 1 . 7/8/2003 ::nods:: true, true. amazing mesage. it never ceases to amaze me how well you get the point across. _ thankyou for posting it. |
| CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 7/8/2003 Amazing! This is truly brilliant! So full of inspiration and with a wonderful message. I loved the fourth paragraph! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 7/8/2003 That is so true! We shouldn't be afraid knowing that God is always there. And it's nice to get accomplishments in life but boasting is not what God wants us to do. We are supposed to give everything to God. And leave nothing hidden from Him. For He is the Way, the Truth, and the Light. (Got that from a True Vibe song. Ever heard of them? Great Christian band, that they are). Great work! ~Princess Mei |
| Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 7/8/2003 great job! quite inspiring...and i love the last line. it ties everything together very well...nice. |
| Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 7/8/2003 Great message, I love it! ~Stoffpferd~ |
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 7/7/2003 great poem! wonderfully written with a great message. yeah, i need to empty out my pockets, free myself of my burdens. Jesus will carry them for us. we just need to come to Him. very true, the last line, for me as well. good job on this. keep on writing for the Father! |
| PainKiller chapter 1 . 7/7/2003 Another amazing poem. The fourth stanza was my favorite. Keep writing. |
| soulspring chapter 1 . 7/7/2003 i love this! such an inspiring work with an important message. this is going in my favs. |