Reviews for The Run
greenfroggies chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
no!...actually, yes! really well written!
Riv chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Creep! Dun Dun Dun!

I'm scared now, gonna go hide!

It was good, v. descriptive, but u might wanna make the paragraphs a little bit shorter...I kept getting lost.

But asides from that it's excellent and as u should ignore me anyway...I'm going now!