|Reviews for Time|
| Niphridell chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
*dances around* woot woot! Why is it that time seems so easy to write about?
| chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Aww... c'mon! What's happened to you? Don't get all depressed now! Great poem, by the way.
| Angerona chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
I really like this.
It's diffrent you know soemthing fresh and new.
I like teh part about being forever suspended in a world of time. Stuck in a world of time, stuck ina world where time flows, stuckt here. being stuck and having time flow don't mix but here in this poem in your poem world they seem to go very nicly together.
I like the part where you kill time as your essence grows, it's like, right this very second you need time, you rely on it, but when you grow up, or you grow out of your life, or something like that, you won't anymore and whats left to do but kill that thing you once needed?
I like the last part, for unless you hinder time itself life and warmth will die, it's a nicer way of saying everyone dies eventually, ever one is eventually killed by time, even if you don;t need it any more.
Great great work. :D keep writing it's good for you.
Angerona the Goddess of Death
Don't mind me i'm crazy but people seem to like that.
| tresparadisE chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
woah, this is really cool. i really like the first line! yeah, forever isn't long enough for that. great work!
| Mime chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Yes, time is a very mysterious subject. Great poem!