Reviews for The Stepbrother
goo goo ga ga 00 chapter 28 . 1/26/2004
hurry and hurry and post another chapter soon!
Spoiled Rotten chapter 28 . 1/25/2004
Wow! Great story! I just read the whole thing today! Anyway, you should write a sequel, I love reading about Zach and Jade. Update soon~!
Mush Jones chapter 28 . 1/24/2004
GREAT CHAPTER! Finally Zach and Jade can be open about their relationship...well with Olivia and stuff anyway. But now Jade's mom is in the hospital? NO! I didn't want something bad to happen. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon.
WickedIceMaiden chapter 27 . 1/23/2004
Nice! The story is coming along beautifuly! Altho the Step bro/sis thing is a little weird... it makes a good story! Update soon!
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Lavender-Drop chapter 28 . 1/23/2004
da buttfor chapter 28 . 1/23/2004
Its very good. i am wondering how you are going to manage to end it in just one more chapter. it seems... impossible. but i dont know what you are planning to write
Ryoko.Kilala chapter 28 . 1/23/2004
GUA! just leave us hanging! *sigh* oh well as long as u update... *grins* ill be fine! Love the story! And i cant wait to see how it comes out!
fortune cookie chapter 28 . 1/22/2004
wow. i have got to say, your story has greatly improved from the beginning. This story is amazing. You could really get it published. But please don't leave me hanging. I know yuo only just updated, but please update agin soon.
DangerousIce chapter 28 . 1/22/2004
AMAZING...well except for the cliff hanger. UPDATE SOON, or I'm gonna go crazy. I LOVE the story so far, and a sequel sounds ideal. Can't wait!
Miss Construed chapter 28 . 1/22/2004
how could you leave me like that. you had better write soon!
fortune cookie chapter 4 . 1/22/2004
this is a really great story so far. i have noticed many typos, all minor. like when you said Jade licked her bottom - i assume you meant bottom lip. also some of the dialogue sounds forced, kind of unnatural. if that's your style, that's fine it's hard to change. anyway, i'll keep reading now.
Evening Myth chapter 28 . 1/21/2004
I enjoyed reading all the way through, which on here. . . isn't so common a lot of the time. Can't wait for the ending! You know. . . it'd be cool if they got married. Write an epilogue! lol. (don't mean to sound so bossy.)
Can't wait for your next story, and I'll be reading the other stories you have here too. You're a pretty good author!
erica chapter 28 . 1/21/2004
oh keep going! This is my fav. story, and u should definitely keep up with the romance between them!
crazyperson27 chapter 28 . 1/21/2004
write write write write
Krysta chapter 28 . 1/20/2004
Oh my gosh! What happened? U have to update soon! i Love this story so there definitly should be a sequel! UPDATE (the last chapt. :( ) really soon!
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