| Reviews for The Stepbrother |
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  Pixie chapter 24 . 12/1/2003 I say it again and again, I LOVE YOUR STORY! This story has managed to catch my attention and now im hooked. Please write another chappie soon. See ya and beware of the little green men! *points at a stranger* |
 October's Star chapter 23 . 12/1/2003 okay, so i forgot some things in the OTHER review i wrote, but i already posted on the last chapter of the story. ANYWAYz, yea, that thing about the first baby, WAY cute. i want a Zach for myself, please and thank you. lol. yea, i think on this vacation they should...umm, get personal. lol, and i dont mean like Olivia and Zach on the plane...and bed would be nice...or at least a house. lol. good good, keep going! |
| October's Star chapter 24 . 12/1/2003 woah. thats all i think i need to say. i just read this whole story in like, a couple hours. and i LOVE it. love it, love it, love it. i cant believe how good it is...but you mentioned something about some drama soon? i hope its not bad...they HAVE to stay together...i bet Olivia is gonna try and steal Zach, so she can have BOTH guys...and i dont like Josh...hes a weirdo. well, PLEASE PLEASE *PLEASE* update NOW! :) |
| Cobby chapter 24 . 12/1/2003 *Bounces* YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAA! Loved it, of course, how could I not? |
| booklover114 chapter 24 . 12/1/2003 This story is amazing I read it all in one night and I swear you are as good as most of the authors I read and you can take that as a compliment because I read 24/7. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Tragedy is Love chapter 24 . 12/1/2003 hehehe, lolz, that was funny! neways, olivia and josh are obviously getting it on! cheers! |
| GoddessofChocolate chapter 24 . 11/30/2003 Wonderful, update soon please |
| Tropical-sandstorm chapter 24 . 11/30/2003 i really like this high you are on...updating really fast and all...keep it up :) |
| DaniStepp chapter 24 . 11/30/2003 The thing about the first child was cute. Zack's a keeper and there arent many of those in this world. I'm patiently (or not)awaiting the next chapter. Great story. |
| Krysta chapter 24 . 11/30/2003 Great chapter! hope u update soon! Oh and the whole Olivia and josh thing on the plane all i can say is OMG! (LOL) |
| Red-Chan chapter 24 . 11/30/2003 That was a great Chapter! I hope they have sex and get married soon. *giggle* |
| MKC chapter 24 . 11/30/2003 this story is so great! i've been hooked since the get-go and probably haven't posted enough reviews to let you know that! keep it up :-) |
| SREFiction chapter 24 . 11/30/2003 Great chappy! Update soon! Mystery-Chick |
| AlienVision chapter 24 . 11/30/2003 luv this...dont put too much drama into this...it'll turn into a soap opera...chappie's great! update soon! |
| LamiaEmpress chapter 23 . 11/30/2003 more more more. i love this story. hope you can write more often. i almost thought you gave up on the story. hope to read the next chapter here soon. heather |