Reviews for The Stepbrother
dreamwriter33 chapter 28 . 8/1/2008
Great story. Very nicely done.
dreamwriter33 chapter 14 . 8/1/2008
OMG! That was too good! I just can't believe they've been caught by grams and pops!...speechless.
Roman C Lee chapter 9 . 7/1/2008
WOOT! Freaking AWESOME! lol, aw, why'd she have to run away? Zach is so sexy it's like . . . omg, *swoons* The way he talks about things, like why he finds virgins attractive, it's beutiful. And really hott, lol. It's midnight and I should go to bed but OMG how can I go to bed after reading that? I have to keep going!
Roman C Lee chapter 4 . 6/30/2008
OMG, she has mood swings. Like, one second she's all happy and nice and then she's YELLING, lol. That's crazy but really funny sometimes. I just feel sorry for those confused guys trying to keep up with her.
Roman C Lee chapter 3 . 6/30/2008
Haha, this is so fun! And YAY Zach has started to notice her! And so has this new guy, lol.
Roman C Lee chapter 2 . 6/30/2008
Hahaha! *turns to Jade* You SO are falling for your step brother! Just admit it! It's hot! 8turns back to author* WOOT! This is freaking awesome! M, I think I used those same phrazes in my other review, lol, but 'awesome' and 'WOOT' are just things that pop up in my typing everywhere.

lol, one look at his chiseled chest and she's head over heels *smirk* She was already kinda digging him before that, I bet.
Roman C Lee chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
O! This is awesome! Would you mind if I added this story to my C2? It's for family love that goes beyond normal 'family love'. I wanted to ask because I wasn't sure if authors would be, like, mad that their stories were being put into an incest C2. I wasn't sure if that would offend anyone. So is it alright?

Great job with this first chapter! Dude, she really can take care of herself, and OMG he's hot, lol. I can't wait to keep reading! WOOT!
Hannah chapter 21 . 5/17/2008
EW! GO AWAY JOSH! Nobody likes you so GO AWAY!
Allie92 chapter 28 . 5/15/2008
ahh that was soo good and the proposal was so gosh darn cute woo sepuel!
Wilt chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
falsenotions chapter 28 . 12/18/2007
i love it! it's so romantic... *sighs*
chickflickjunkie chapter 28 . 8/24/2007
oh my god! i loved this! it was just soo romantic and sweet at the end...yea i know i sound like a flake, but oh well..D
Strangely Natural chapter 28 . 8/6/2007
Precious and cute with few but real tribulations, is there going to be a sequel?
outsidersgirl chapter 28 . 6/26/2007
a good story
Mrs. MJackson chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
loving it so far, now i'm off to read the rest!
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