Reviews for The Stepbrother
siddika chapter 28 . 2/4/2007
GOOD JOB.
OoohLookACat chapter 28 . 12/14/2006
aw

so cute!

that was so darn adorable.

much different from all those other step-brother/step-sister stories.

i like it.

good work!
AJS chapter 28 . 8/28/2006
Hey I just found your story but it's so cute :) Haha. I think that you could have maybe spent some more time building up to the romance but all in all, I liked it a lot :) It's short and sweet and it's just one of those heart-warming stories, you know? The ending is very fitting too. I was wodering when the sequel to this would be coming out, and will it still be about Zach & Jade or other characters in the story? Josh's transition from liking Jade to Olivia was pretty confusing & quick but I guess that doesn't really matter much to the plot, just the fact that he's out of there. I can't help but to wonder what Zach's latest book was about, but that was seriously one HELL of a cute way to propose T_T *dies* Btw, after reading this, I saw a Barnes & Nobles bookstore by my school and thought maybe I should work there too... HAHA :x

Anyways, great story. I loved it a lot :) Keep up the good work and I hope to read more stories by you soon

- Alyssa
naningxoxo chapter 28 . 8/5/2006
THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME! I LOVED IT THROUGH AND THROUGH! I LOVE THE ENDING AND I FEEL THAT IT FITS THE STORY PERFECTLY! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL I READ MORE OF YOUR STORIES!
akaCHEEKS chapter 28 . 7/26/2006
aww that is soo cuute!
akaCHEEKS chapter 8 . 7/25/2006
hehe i'm liking this story so far! i love olivia's character and personality she is soo funny!
SmartiePants924 chapter 28 . 6/13/2006
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story... VERY good writing!
cherrypiesizzle chapter 28 . 6/2/2006
Wow, you have no idea how unbelievable this story is. It's so amazing...wow. I have no words for it, well all I can say is that it's phenominal. It's so passionate but filled with feelings of a for once normal relationship. I am so sick and tired of reading of stories where the guy is extremely possessive or whatever. This was an AMAZING story...keep up your good work. I loved it enough to add you to my fav authors and stories list (you should check it out by the way)...and even though I haven't added anybody to my fav authors list yet, and I haven't read any of your other stories if you have any, I will add you. Wow...you're awesome.
Morgan Davis chapter 28 . 4/23/2006
omg! so good! when the mom asked to see "it" i was like omg! he's gunna propose to her in the dedication! lol and look! i was right! i loved this story! ok now for my critque: there are some pretty bad mistakes with letters. the punctuation is fine but you sometimes get words wrong with like one letter and its a completely different word! lol just go throught and revise! good job!
SolisLuna chapter 28 . 4/16/2006
I LOVED THIS STORY AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL! This was an awesome story!

SL

Lol, I think I said the same thing twice. :P
this.is.my.life chapter 28 . 3/30/2006
Wow. All I have to say is Wow. I know you've gotten hundreds of other reviews and this one won't make the difference but I wanted to let you know how amazing you truly are. I needed to get my mind off things so I sat down and started reading your story, immediately I was just grabed into it. The way you write makes the world disappear and as a reader I fell into the drama. This story just might give me the courage to ask a certain someone a certain something that I've been wanting to for a long time... ;) he better be ready, because I'm coming.
nickyk89 chapter 4 . 3/2/2006
awesome.
Alenor chapter 28 . 12/30/2005
hmm, ok this was a great story, cya ~ Alenor.
BeautifulSin chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
wow!
bebe chapter 28 . 11/13/2005
hey i love your story. would you by any chance think of making a sequel?maybe about Zach and Jade's life together. Maybe starting right before there married?just a thought. bebe
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