awsome poem! i thought it rocked!

hey, your poem was really funny, and i'm guessing very true to what can happen when your drunk, but ya know i highly doubt that you'll never drink again.

~MadeinDetroit~

Haha!:)

Cutely true- all the amusing things drunk people can do:)

'thought I looked cool', 'tried to act like a Romeo hunk', 'my feet were not stable'- ha! all funny stuff(:

And a great description of a hangover- such pain, such groggy pain!

Happy birthday if it was.

Hehe, I wonder how it feels to get drunk... I'm in no rush to try it out at age 17, haha. I liked the fourth stanza. Nice work.

Happy birthday! Lol, this was really funny, sounds like you had a good time ;) I loved the lines:

"I tried to act like a Romeo hunk

And, the girls laughed and said, “You’re drunk.”

Some of the gals danced on the table

I tried too but, my feet were not stable."

Have fun being 21 :) Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*

Lol, true story? _ nice poem, though some of he rhyme sound a little forced, it's still make a funny, and entertaining poem. My brother did that too, scared quite a few homeless men while he walked down the street lol. But anyways, thanks for recomending that poetry site, i joined, but, I have no idea on how to post poetry, acually, i'm little lost on how that place works...

Any advice?

At first I thought you're teaching people not to drink. Or maybe you are. I'm not sure. At least you rhymed.

Drinking is for the birds...Awesome piece!

*lol* Cool poem...

~Stoffpferd~

This is a nice little poem. heh. i would say something more exciting but im just way too tired. i thought you werent posting here ne more... but then i saw and author alert from you and i was like.. wow.. well good night now bud

hahaa sounds like a good night

What a birthday! That was funny.

*claps* BRAVO! I know I've alread read this once but I had to read it again...*grabs a soda* I tost you and your work D