Reviews for Happy Birthday to Me
Dark Angel The Temptress chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
awsome poem! i thought it rocked!
ash f chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
hey, your poem was really funny, and i'm guessing very true to what can happen when your drunk, but ya know i highly doubt that you'll never drink again.

SweetGrape chapter 1 . 7/22/2003

Cutely true- all the amusing things drunk people can do:)

'thought I looked cool', 'tried to act like a Romeo hunk', 'my feet were not stable'- ha! all funny stuff(:

And a great description of a hangover- such pain, such groggy pain!

Happy birthday if it was.
PainKiller chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Hehe, I wonder how it feels to get drunk... I'm in no rush to try it out at age 17, haha. I liked the fourth stanza. Nice work.
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Happy birthday! Lol, this was really funny, sounds like you had a good time ;) I loved the lines:

"I tried to act like a Romeo hunk

And, the girls laughed and said, “You’re drunk.”

Some of the gals danced on the table

I tried too but, my feet were not stable."

Have fun being 21 :) Keep writing :)

Quilir chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Lol, true story? _ nice poem, though some of he rhyme sound a little forced, it's still make a funny, and entertaining poem. My brother did that too, scared quite a few homeless men while he walked down the street lol. But anyways, thanks for recomending that poetry site, i joined, but, I have no idea on how to post poetry, acually, i'm little lost on how that place works...

Any advice?
grey paper star chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
At first I thought you're teaching people not to drink. Or maybe you are. I'm not sure. At least you rhymed.
Needa S chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Drinking is for the birds...Awesome piece!
Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
*lol* Cool poem...

Tanika chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
This is a nice little poem. heh. i would say something more exciting but im just way too tired. i thought you werent posting here ne more... but then i saw and author alert from you and i was like.. wow.. well good night now bud
wonky donkey chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
hahaa sounds like a good night
Ingridtk chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
What a birthday! That was funny.
lil blue song bird chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
*claps* BRAVO! I know I've alread read this once but I had to read it again...*grabs a soda* I tost you and your work D