|Reviews for The Sun Behind the Moon|
| the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
The whole sun behind the moon idea is a smart analogy. Nice job.
| Misty Woods chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
There's only one word to describe this lovely poem- BEAUTIFUL! :)
| Amrun chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
Very deep and well-written. My finger hurts, (it got hurt pretty badly today,) so I won't be too extensive. I enjoyed it, though it was a bit confusing at parts. It could be a bit less lyrical and metaphorical, in my opinion. Though this makes it quite beautiful, it also makes it quite confusing. Anyways, thanks for the review!
| Shadafakup chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
This was extremely beautiful.. I don't know what to say about this.. Its positive and like your other pieces, very inspirational.. Beautiful.. All the descriptions and the situations where we still have hope which is the sun behind the moon.. Good images used.. I loved it.. It was so well written and described and amazingly expressed.. Extremely well done.. So positive and so moving.. I loved it.. )
| blessed-goddess chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
It takes more than hands and skin
I love that line...wow a very beautiful and spiritual piece. It just shows how much of what was made for us, is taken for granted. Thank u for this 1...it reminded me of our loss