Reviews for Until The End
Isthischaos chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
Very powerful, very emotive, a very good piece indeed!
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
Wow, this was quite sad but it's beautiful to see you have friends which you love so much. I hope you are not feeling like this anymore. Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*
Lise HEARTS Alan chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
Thank u gurl! I feel so good and u made me feel better about the situation that we are talking about. U are my best friend and we can talk about anything and just to see a friend dedicate a poem to me? Wow! I'v never had a friend do that, except maybe one, gurl, u about to make me cry, this was so good. I need to start writing again. I'm so happy! Keep writing and doing what u doing.
MoLay chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
you have really good repetition happening in this piece...you're right you have changed your writitng on this one...

I personally liked the touch you added w/ the pauses readers get as they move on to the part "on Earth" and "...hurt"

but the truth of the matter is, I probably like it mostly because I was one of the dedicatees ;-)

ps

you need to clean up your autobio, no joke. (you know exactly what I mean by "clean up".