Reviews for Doing Chores Without Help
pointythings chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Believe me, I know the feeling. This happens to me all the time.
Amelia Sandberg chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
great rhyme and rhythm. know how you feel. my dad CANNOT clean.
FireNeiko chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Life sux like that
Funn little Poem D
Lil Sis chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
That is wonderful I love reading your poems, Dan! And I love at the end of this one you used the moon bringing in the tide. You are the Best!
The Rejection chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
ha ha, I can relate.
My parents never shout at my brother for not doing chores, and he sometimes stay up in his room for days and does nothing. I mean, how does he get awaly with it? How?
Anyway, nice poem.
Long Live the Losers chapter 1 . 1/23/2004
I liked that! It was sweet and light and cute, and reminded me how frustrating I used to find it when I always had to do the dishes and all my brother had to do was take out the trash..
Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Nice. Oh and bty, you can do whatever you want with any reviews I give you. K? C ya!
Kylia Ravencraft chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
Maybe I should show this to my husband...LOL
bgpresto chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
This is the beginning of a great career of writing. This person has much potential.
Mime chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
Yeah, I agree that it's very frustrating to do chores by yourself. I think the only reason I stick to mine is because of pride also. Great job!
Rachel chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
Nice story with interesting style. I just got confused about who the character is. I've gotta compliment you on your style, though.
Zilg chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Nice. I get those feelings when doing chores myself.
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
nice. this was very effective0)