| Reviews for Doing Chores Without Help |
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   pointythings chapter 1 . 9/2/2004 Believe me, I know the feeling. This happens to me all the time. |
| Amelia Sandberg chapter 1 . 7/15/2004 great rhyme and rhythm. know how you feel. my dad CANNOT clean. |
| FireNeiko chapter 1 . 6/21/2004 Life sux like that Funn little Poem D |
| Lil Sis chapter 1 . 6/5/2004 That is wonderful I love reading your poems, Dan! And I love at the end of this one you used the moon bringing in the tide. You are the Best! |
| The Rejection chapter 1 . 5/26/2004 ha ha, I can relate. My parents never shout at my brother for not doing chores, and he sometimes stay up in his room for days and does nothing. I mean, how does he get awaly with it? How? Anyway, nice poem. |
| Long Live the Losers chapter 1 . 1/23/2004 I liked that! It was sweet and light and cute, and reminded me how frustrating I used to find it when I always had to do the dishes and all my brother had to do was take out the trash.. |
| Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 10/2/2003 Nice. Oh and bty, you can do whatever you want with any reviews I give you. K? C ya! |
| Kylia Ravencraft chapter 1 . 7/31/2003 Maybe I should show this to my husband...LOL |
| bgpresto chapter 1 . 7/25/2003 This is the beginning of a great career of writing. This person has much potential. |
| Mime chapter 1 . 7/24/2003 Yeah, I agree that it's very frustrating to do chores by yourself. I think the only reason I stick to mine is because of pride also. Great job! |
| Rachel chapter 1 . 7/20/2003 Nice story with interesting style. I just got confused about who the character is. I've gotta compliment you on your style, though. |
| Zilg chapter 1 . 7/9/2003 Nice. I get those feelings when doing chores myself. |
| swift sky silver chapter 1 . 7/9/2003 nice. this was very effective0) |