Reviews for Doing Chores Without Help |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Believe me, I know the feeling. This happens to me all the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great rhyme and rhythm. know how you feel. my dad CANNOT clean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Life sux like that Funn little Poem D |
![]() ![]() That is wonderful I love reading your poems, Dan! And I love at the end of this one you used the moon bringing in the tide. You are the Best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ha ha, I can relate. My parents never shout at my brother for not doing chores, and he sometimes stay up in his room for days and does nothing. I mean, how does he get awaly with it? How? Anyway, nice poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked that! It was sweet and light and cute, and reminded me how frustrating I used to find it when I always had to do the dishes and all my brother had to do was take out the trash.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Oh and bty, you can do whatever you want with any reviews I give you. K? C ya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe I should show this to my husband...LOL |
![]() ![]() This is the beginning of a great career of writing. This person has much potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I agree that it's very frustrating to do chores by yourself. I think the only reason I stick to mine is because of pride also. Great job! |
![]() ![]() Nice story with interesting style. I just got confused about who the character is. I've gotta compliment you on your style, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. I get those feelings when doing chores myself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice. this was very effective0) |