Reviews for Helpless
Writerofascientist chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
That's so sad :-(
Akiko Suzuki chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
Houseofelrond chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
a few spelling errors ("emember" "soal" etc.) but overall, i enjoyed it, especially good description of emotions. jumps around a lot to different ideas and feelings which makes it interesting but also a bit hard to follow at times.
Lazerponies chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Wow, I like this, it radiates power and describes reality amazingly. Good work.