| Reviews for Helpless |
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   Writerofascientist chapter 1 . 1/4/2004 That's so sad :-( |
| Akiko Suzuki chapter 1 . 7/20/2003 cool...wow...depressing... |
| Houseofelrond chapter 1 . 7/9/2003 a few spelling errors ("emember" "soal" etc.) but overall, i enjoyed it, especially good description of emotions. jumps around a lot to different ideas and feelings which makes it interesting but also a bit hard to follow at times. |
| Lazerponies chapter 1 . 7/9/2003 Wow, I like this, it radiates power and describes reality amazingly. Good work. |