Reviews for Scorching Sun
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
ah, summer! after writing about this, you should write about jumping into a cool pool on a day with a 'scorching sun.' ;) haha jk!
chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
I've read this once, yet I didn't review it and now I wonder why. Great haiku!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
gah, hate the sun, but i muchly like this haiku, interesting, nicely done
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
That's how it is here.

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It all fades away chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Great Haiku. It's a little ironic I read this because I just got away from 2 hours of "Hot Merciless rays." Great Haiku.