Reviews for Pendulum
Jaded Shadow chapter 2 . 7/10/2003
Ok, i wasn't listening to the song, so, yeah, the rhythm felt a bit weird. However, i do like the way it flows. Weirdly nice. However, watch your spellings, i noticed a couple of times that u spelled 'them' as 'theme'. Sometimes lil typos like that will either throw u out of sync w/ the story, or even alienate the reader. I didn't mind it, but... *realizes she's rambling*


Deenie chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Wow! I Like this a lot. This is so good, I'd love to read the rest of it! Please put the next chapter on soon, for my sake! You have a really powerfull style of writing.