|Reviews for Dark Side of the Moon|
| next time chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
the summary looked intersesting but then once i opened it to read the prologue the format just doesnt look all that pretty. when you skip spaces you do not have to indent. i'm sure it's a fine story but after looking at it too long then reading the reviews to see that it's not a happy ending i'm sorry but i cannot continue reading this. good luck though, i hope you learn from me rather than just hate me.
| bookwormhottie chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
| tears chapter 27 . 6/19/2005
tht was sad! u need to warn ppl icried a lot. i was hoping 4 a fluffy ending and igot this..now dont get me wrong this was a wonderful story but its incredibly sad. why didnt jess go see a counselor or something?you also saids he was unfeeling but there was a lotof feeling which i didnt get since she was numb..also why didnt her friends do something? you also said tht love set the ppl free from the dark side of the moon why wasnt jess set free tht way she would have known if it was truelove? wouldnt someone have noticed this condition? i think its really hard to believe tht she would have gone all through life and no one would have noticed or done anything about it hetr brother noticed it why didnt he do something about it if this is as life traumitising as it sounds why didnt anything happen to make it go away? it was a really good story but some parts were hardto believe...dont pay attention to all my questions all tht much i was ranting b/c i really wanted jess and chase to get together and stay tht waywell tht and i was wondering why these things happened but anyway it was a really good story
| x0x-Still-Alive-x0x chapter 27 . 7/15/2004
Hey! Lat time, i really didn't read the whole story! But i just finished the rest! *glares* I have so much to say but just one question...WHY DIDN'T U BRING JESSICA AND CHASE TOGETHER?...lol sorry it kinda bothered me hehe BUT THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER gurl! And about my story...i found it erased this morning...complete with the poems :( I was so depressed when i saw what had happened :( I don't think i want to continue anymore...*sigh* but i still put up the first chapter of "The Curse" but im still debating with myself whether i should continue writing this story...Well, anyways, WONDERFUL STORY! *applauds* If you want, i'll put my story back up...and i posted my seventh chapter up yesterday just to suffer depression this morning when i saw ALL my stories GONE! anyways see ya! GREAT STORY! I LOVED IT! [except for the horribly sad parts where i ended up running to the bathroom and crying my eyes out and the end was not happy!how could u do this? *sniffle*] but that was an awesome story still! :)
| x0x-Still-Alive-x0x chapter 11 . 7/13/2004
Woohoo great story! That was awesome *clicks on favorites* )
| ethan chapter 20 . 7/7/2004
excellent writing style
i was interested the whole time...
seems to me kinda like she was
unaccepting of help? it seemed like chase was there to help and she just kinda threw him away
| yearslater chapter 27 . 4/10/2004
Beautiful. I loved it.
| moon monster chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
dark side of the moon is a great album. GO PINK FLOYD
| MooMooMoo chapter 27 . 9/20/2003
oh my...things never work out the way you want them to. ah! very well written story, yes, the angst was strong, but it was sort of creepy... i don't know why. did jess ever get married? gosh, alana really should be murdered. stupid chase, tsk tsk tsk. i wish i could live their live and undo everything that went wrong, but i can't. Beautiful story...so sad, i think im going to go read a happy one now, _.
never stop casting footprints
| MooMooMoo chapter 15 . 9/20/2003
ah! must..kill..alana...or is it all a hallucination? anyways, *stabs alana*
| MooMooMoo chapter 6 . 9/20/2003
wow...sry for short reviews, but i'll have a nice fat review for u at the end
| MooMooMoo chapter 4 . 9/20/2003
no! let..chase...go? hm _ eek. i like how you compare things, like the water and the oil, really poetic.
| MooMooMoo chapter 2 . 9/20/2003
| guess who chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
i dont believe in true love...will u go to homecoming with me? haha, lil bit late, but then ago i asked u a long time ago b4 too.
| penster chapter 27 . 9/5/2003
I cried...I really cried at the end of the epilogue. You did an amazing job. I envy you. This story was well written and thought out. Thanks for all the memories. Love always, penster * Somewhere in the clouds *