|Reviews for So Red So Sweet|
| the.pink.life chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
This is so tragic and sad. Yet there's somehow this romantic feeling to it.
"any more" - "anymore"
"Her wrists, one two/No time at all" - for some reason, I really like the way this reads...maybe it's the idea of her just slitting her wrists that easily
The last half of this is really sad. There's the tension created with the line "Then to her throat," and you know what's going to happen, but you're hoping it doesn't. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
| Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Beautiful, powerful, sad, morbid... I love it.
Black and White Dreams
| Nine-Black-Roses chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
such a sad poem yet sumhow so beautiful in its sadness. feels o meaningfuli love the last line.x
| backseats on thursdays chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
Almost... Shakespearean. Wonderful work.
| Infinite Obscurity chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
Its really amazing! I LOVE THE LAST LINe. As deaths kiss she does embrace...best lines...trying to find beauty in death...Thanks for ur comment, by the writing...you rule...lol
| J Pine chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Wow! Very powerful stuff! I sometimes wish I could do that. But gettin off topic :P keep up the great work (i'll probably be reviewing a few other poems of yours) and thank you for the review on If I Can't Have Her
| aquamoon222 chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
So Very sad! This is an amazing peice of work and flows with grace and beauty. Very strong in my mind; it seems everything you write is strong in my mind!:)
If you don't mind I was wondering if you'd reviwe my newest poem called sea of tears. That is, if you want to.:) Thanks alot!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
wow.. very powerful.. I like it.. try this for stanzas.. go to the edit/preview... go to the end of a line Hold shift & hit enter.. tehn hit delete.. lemm know if that doesnt work
| Kalopsia chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
oh morbid poetry! this is very good.
| deepinthought chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
I love it. Kind of creepy really, and not the way I want to die, but it is really good. Nice vocabulary.
| Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
So sad...and well written. Good job- except don't kill yourself!
| ROMAN EMPEROR chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
poetic, gentlte, and intense. nice, very nice.
| Silk Weaker chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
nice... a few awkward bits now and then but otherwise fine
| Mizutaka chapter 1 . 11/20/2003
*chucks brick at * Stupid website! I wrote a nice review for your poem . . . twice! But no, they both get erased because the internet window freaked out and then the server went down! ARG! And with my luck all three reviews will end up getting posted and I'll look like an idiot.
Ahem . . . sorry about the rant, I'm sightly annoyed. _ Anyway, onto the review. Ep! Lovely imagery, especially the gorgeous "territory" and "deaths kiss" lines, but still you've captured epness in all of its glory! And I love it that way! (then again, who doesn't love creepy epness?) Good job!
| NeWriter chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
"As deaths kiss she does embrace." I think it should be like " As death kisses she does embrace". Or something similar; it sounds weird like that. You used a lot of metaphors and good words in this poem. Good work!