Reviews for Internal Storm
pixie sticks chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
wow... i really like how you tied in emotions with the characteristics of storms and my favorite line is "As I break free from the last chains of hope." this is so amazing... oh yeah i almost forgot... thanks for the reviews!
these kids chapter 1 . 8/31/2003
I have always admired those who write free verse poems well. You are one of them, and I congradulate you on your sucess. I really like how you use real objects and sounds to create an image for your feelings. Well written. :)
Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Another intense and intriguing poem. Excellent work! You write as though you can really see it. Like you are simply describing what you see. It is amazing! You are very talented!

*AbunaiChikara