|Reviews for Do I Dare?|
| Jennacharm chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
The mellow and yellow line is awkward. Same with the Orange.
But I like the end. It really uplifts the poem... cute:)
| these kids chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
sounds like the true mind of a teenager. one who debates on whether to wear this or to dress like this and is always wondering what others might think of it. great emotion :)
(Thanks for the reviews)
| Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Another interesting poem. You did a marvelous job. You always seem to find the most intriguing topics. I like it!