Come on you have to update this soon i love people should read this story as its amazing! Update soon !

wow! kool story! finish it...plz...update...i wanna read wat happens next...

I'm still loving this story keep on writing. I'll check back soon to see if you have updated.

Okay so i suck at reviews all i say is thats great well done etc

And im gonna say the same things over again that was great and i cant wait until you update. Its great to see the first chapter from a guys perspective for once and his emotions coming through.

Seems somewhat familiar...do i know it from somewhere? OH I DON'T KNOW MAYBE A CREATED KINGDOM I ONCE LIVED IN?