|Reviews for Bus Trip|
| recalcitrant chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
i think that this is a very impressive write. it has a unique style and a strong voice. its very high in the quality of the content. good job.
i hope you will take some time to review some of my work as well.
| powderyblue chapter 1 . 4/10/2001
What a beautiful story.
| Shara Ka'Li chapter 1 . 12/29/2000
Aww.. that is the sweetest story I've read in ages! Very, very nice..!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2000
wow. That was really nice and sweet and well written.i'll have to visit your site sometime...
| tRuELaDy0525 chapter 1 . 12/23/2000
aww.. ..that was bittersweet..very nice!
| Amorina Leigh Carlton chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
That was sooo good. She reminded me so much of myself it's not even funny. And your a great writer your stories are so realistic and full of life. Keep writing.
| Cuaima chapter 1 . 12/15/2000
errr... my first crush was a ninja turtle, hahahahahaha! Even ppl who've had bfs feel like that. I think your characterization was great, I could almost swear it was real life... the only problem was that the boy was too charming and too cruel at the same time and there was no real motive to all those feelings. It was just like magic, and love's no magic. The self-pity parts were very nice written. Very cleaver writting.
| the ringmaster chapter 1 . 12/9/2000
sweet..that was an awesome story...majorly encouraging
| scary fairy chapter 1 . 12/9/2000
This story is so incredibly moving! I luv it! I wish i wrote it!