Reviews for Forever
loves-first-kiss chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
WHOA, that was deep, and stright forward, i loved it!
R. A. Oaks chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
I really loved your last words, "Now I know I'd rather be dead than have people

Hate me because I'm someone I'm not" I believe that your poem touched a lot of ideas, even some that you might not have thought of while you were writing it. Very deep.
Smarie chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
the beginning was weak but the end was stronger...I like the ending though
Silver Magiccraft chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
Great poem. I did't see any sp errors...Please write(and post) soon!


teh tarik chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
Great poem. It takes forever to figure things out sometimes, but that's OK, as long as you do realize where you're wrong and right.