Reviews for BITTERSWEET
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Veneya chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
wow it's really good so far but more wouuld be brilliant:)
rockerchick chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
this story is great and you totally made it obvious that it will be incest in later stories I love his older brother for brinning flowers to him at his parents funneral that was so sweet
Rika Onienkai chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
Hi! You might want to change your rating to M instead of K . lol
g0shawk chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
I've never read an incest before, but this was really good so far! :) Are you going to write more?
scenester7002 chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
i liked it so far.. please write more.
emoButterfy chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
I love this story! I can't wait to read more!
Flying Ninja of the Midmorning chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
_ You should continue this soon...

A very good start.

I like Arekku... I want to hug him when he cries! But you described him so thin... Would I break him? Teehee.

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Peach Mouse
Lady hispanic chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
So well this is my first incest story. However I'm writing one myself (with a friend actually, we've written it together, when one can't think of what to put next the other takes over. It's great for when you get authors block...)Anyway interesting introduction. Could use abit more construction on the characters and setting. I'm not even sure where this story takes place. Otherswise I found it intrigueing, we'll see what happens next.
Kura-sama chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Its a cute begining Write more soon
explicitones chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
will you ever update?
SatisfyAnEmptyInside chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
*sniffles, pokes story* Ever going to continue? I would love for it to.
Posed to Death chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
:] YES! Great story! I love this story! I only found a few errors. You format.. there's like.. almost no angst.
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I don't think you understand how happy this makes me. [heart]ing on you.
subtleline chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
Well...this should b interesting. Update soon. Its so cute and real. I mean the reactions r so...true. I really like. Update!
Starry Veil chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Oh, come on, don't leave it at that! Seriously, this is the third review I've ever written for a fictionpress story because I only do it for ones that impress me, and then the people I review for have stories that haven't been updated! Please continue! Please!
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