Omg! That is so sad!

My first reaction? It's so freakin' creepy! Seriously, I got like a sort of chill when Annie found out... It was creepy and good... in a creepy sort of way. 0_0 haha, okay, I'll stop with the word creepy. Anything else? Um... Great story, wonderful plot developments, great prompt from your brother! haha, I'd like something like that... A prompt, I mean, though a brother would be nice too... -_- haha, keep writing!

this is awesome! how do you write so good? i'm turning green with jealousy. ohw come everybody can write better than me?
~godzgurlroc

**speechless**
Oh...my GOD. This was amazing. AMAZING. The details, the way you weave descriptions and feelings into a beautiful tapestry of words...the PLOT. The...the...everything. Wow.
You...are so...incredibly talented. I..just..WOW. Wow.
It's clear that 110% effort was put into this, and it shows veritably. This is a story to be proud of, Matches. Great job! _

wow, this is...this is...well...
AWESOME! *hears an echo*
Great job! You are so talented! Hope you make more great stories as this one!
Tracey

Dramatic scenes. very fitting.

That was just truly awsome work.

wow... that's all that can be said to describe it...

Wow. That was unreal! You make the possibility of a child with mind-reading capabilites out to be incredibly plausible! The whole story seemed as if it was taken from real life, the emotions and actions of the characters bridged a spectrum of human emotions. The plot was great and the ending had a bruising sadness that was great! Keep up the good work. I'll be looking for more of your work later!

i liked reading this. it definitely had an eerie feeling to it and yet at the same time it felt like i was kind of reading a mystery short story. what was it that he exactly done to kill all of those people? including the one he gave his trust to. the story was excellent in my mind definitely. read some of what i got if interested. :)