load of depth. reminded me of my life actually, thats kinda sad... not ur poem. newa this is a great poem and ur amazing at making stuff ryhme. i wish i cud werite like this. btw thnx agen for revewing my poem.
I.C.T

wow im gonna hav to say thats the best poem ive read on fictionpress. omg. also, thank u 4 the review. i read all the ppl that reviewed me's poetry. but wow. i didnt no wut to expect but that was just amazing...

Simply loved the rhymes!

Dang. You got some pretty powerful lines in there "Mournful regrets of tragic mistakes." This is a sad, very beautiful poem. Reminds me of my life, basically. I wanna cry now. I think I'm going to. Thanks a lot for making me cry jerk! *translating* In other words, good job! _

I really liked this one. It actually rhymed! q Great content, imagery. Not too long, not too short. Kudos

below the surface (deep)

Simply beautiful. Deep. *Speechless*