Reviews for Silver
hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
Sehr schön, ziemlich düster. Die Großbuchstaben haben auch eine tolle Wirkung, geniales Gedicht!

cio, hoellenwauwau
Reptils chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
Die erste Strophe holpert ein bißchen. Der Rest hat dafür einen wundervollen Klang. Es malt ein wunderschönes, dunkles Bild.

Ciao, Reptils
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
I must agree with not sure yet about the first stanza...it's beautiful. It's incredible to think that the fact one person is bleeding the universe stops...
not sure yet chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
dark, and again powerful use of capitiliaztion, muchly enjoyed this one, good imagery and a bit of mystery set about this one i think, love the first stanza best in this one, beautifully done
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
This was haunting. The metaphors created some vivid images. Very well-written. Good work, keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*
Silverfire Starr chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
Wow, this is really good!

keep writing!

s.s.