I like.
It's insightful.
It's thought-provoking.
It's lovely.
It's something a lot of authors should read and understand, and comprehend and love.
Just like I have.
Thank you for your review
-Celestial Sailor

I am touched...

Ayx

wow.. this poem is well written & has great imagery.. its sounds beautiful.. one thing i dont like the dandelions.. cuz they're not really pretty & they make me sneeze.. i'd rather daisy.. but hey its your poem not mine! & its very good!

I Like youur poems alot really it's all very interesting- hope you write more-

-Anna-

I think I found that this piece has great rhythm. The rhyming works well. It doesn't seem forced. I also like the message. It makes you think...something I think you wanted to do...

I loved this. It was fine work.

~Heart of the Sword

Very nice! I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing.

If you leave out the "and words" part of your poem, I can relate. If you don't leave that out, I can't relate, but I can honestly say I like the poem.