|Reviews for Welcome to the Machine|
| Soichiro X chapter 3 . 8/31/2003
I love how you're developing this, leaving a lot of possibilities. It's been so long since I've been back, but it's good to know that there's still good stuff on this site. Excellent job, I'll be around sometime to read the next chapter.
| Soichiro X chapter 2 . 7/29/2003
How interesting. I have a theory on what's going on, as well as what the kids are, though I learned it's always in one's best interests to not pass up the opportunity to keep your mouth shut. I really like where this story is going and how you're setting it up so early for so many possibilities. Good job with this chapter, I'll be waiting for more updates.
| Soichiro X chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
I really like this. Your style is very descriptive yet doesn't distract from the story. Also, you've come up with a thoroughly original idea. Please continue with this. If you do, I promise to follow it. One last question: Did you take the title from Pink Floyd? Just curious cause they're one of my favorites.