|Reviews for Sugarcoated|
| Nobody1 chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
i definately appreciate that it is not identicle to every other depression poem out there. good job with the new aspect, not before but after they attempt. still, i dont think you communicated the emotion as artfully as you could have, but then again this particular poem does not really require you to do so. (ps. if you intend on writing some kind of retort or response to this comment, please post it anonomously so that i can delete it later) (oh yeah, and read hidden and glimps of darkness, they are a bit darker than my others)
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
I like this poem a lot... It makes a lot of sense to me! Hehe!