Again, I am impressed by the level of raw emotion you put into your poems. They resonate with the primal side that all humans have.

"My screams are swallowed by the emptiness

Or maybe my ears refuse to hear the endless echoing?"

My sweet Zeus I love this line.

Cheers.

I liked it. You had a lot of good parts, but maybe you let it roll on a little too long. Try to shorten it a bit. Nice work!

o.. creepy ending! [i liked it ] lovely work, keep writing!