Reviews for The Girl Named After a Toilet
AVIGON chapter 2 . 8/4/2003
This is really funny. The first part about the goat-like-ness was a bit on the silly side, but after that it kept getting better. Will there be more, Oh God Please Say Yes?

(and ah, thanks for making those sentences understandable for lil ol' me. ;o))
Keren Fainche chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
Dear Avigon,

Thanks for pointing those out to me...I wouldn't have seen otherwise. Anyway, I'll correct them here:

-Except for the one where he...but I won't digress.

-Mockery, that brings me back. Back to...(you'll see what happens next chapter)

Thanks again,

Keren
MayDragon chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
This is hilarious! Please, I must have more ;)
You Need More Flair chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
That was funny. Very funny. Please update. Please.
AVIGON chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
I'm really glad I took the time to read this. It truly is a lovely story, and you have a wonderful style.

A couple of sentences didn't make much sense to me though:

- "Except for the one where I won't digress."

- "Mockery, that brings me to"

Is this a one time thing, or will there be more?