Reviews for Perfect
R.A. Sears chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
If you're yourself and aren't all of these things, then it sounds like you passed to me. Standardized tests are all bullshit anyway. :)
Good flow and rhyme.
TheatrePhunk chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
Dude, I can totally relate to that. Everyone expects me to be as goody-goody as my older sister, and I hate it. People always compare me to her, and when they do it sounds like they're calling me an idiot. Ugh. Nice song!
Teresz chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
aw. hey, who said being those things was a good thing...actually don't answer that. Society huh? well Society lies!
SoulessFreedom chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
my life story.
UnknownWanderer chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
I like the 6th stanza most, probably. However, the whole poem has a good concept to it. Get some music for it. P
prettybrightlight chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
Wow. I love your song. I feel like that alot and that song helped me feel just a little bit better.
me-and-only chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
Wow, that is really good. I can't really describe why but it feels like what I'm going through.
Cryptic Insanity chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
-breath catches in throat from the superb-ness of this song-