Reviews for I'm everywhere
Jisu chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
That's really deep. Keep up the good work :)
HobbitGirl814 chapter 1 . 11/4/2003
Thanks for the review. I'm going to return the favor.

I love this.
SilverBeliever chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
That is some good I love your writing


New Chapter up
Tenika D chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
Coolio! I think this is my favorite of yours so far - it has a lot of flavor. My one suggestion is perhaps to make the line, "Do you know what I am?" only have one question mark. Too much expression can make it seem overblown. All in all, very good!

Tenika Dargan

If you want words in a document put into bold, upload the document as an internet file. I don't know how to put bold or italics in a bio right now - I'm still trying to find out. Sorry I couldn't help more . . .
Zekk Karst chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
Hey, that's cool! & a bit...creepy. I like how you ended w\ the date and time. I don't know if you meant for that to be part of the poem, but it fits. Kinda like a message. Those last three lines remind me of a stalker...
Utena42 chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Cool! Me likies a lot!

Very well done!
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDolly chapter 1 . 7/21/2003
ooh I like :D

DavoFreak chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
Wow! This is good! *grin*
Joan Mistress of Magic chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
Well that was short, but very good. You sould write more stuff like that.