Reviews for The Demons Inside |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aww cute ending :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() small typo ""My dream... the man, who was her?"" but otherwise its awsum :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha nice :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() random thing: stephen king was just a perverted drunkard! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i prefer this ending- with everyone getting a happy ending *wipes away tears from previous chapter* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I stayed up till 1:30 reading this... and you made me cry. Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you for bringing him back. I love you so much. You should make a sequal... though I might never read it your to good at writing if you actually made me cry... Thank You again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story. The plotline is different, and the characters have personalities. I like how they're based a little bit off of you and your friends. The only thing is the ending. Haven't quite made up my mind about that; i'm very happy that Dante returned, but still not sure if I'd rather have him not come back. Anyway, awesome story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Apparently I'm a sucker for sappy romantic stories that end happy. Oh well. That being said...I LOVE THIS STORY! Seriously the only thing I didn't like was Gia's name [but that's probably because EVERYBODY mispronounces my middle name and it always comes out as "Gia"...] Anyways! I loved her personality (the whole sarcasm thing) and realy like the demon stuff in your story. |
![]() ![]() omgsh. i love your work i really do. and i love the writting style. this is a really good story. im writting one of my own but its not this good. also like your drawings you do. very well done. ok well im done lata |
![]() ![]() i absolutely loved this story! amazing job! u should post up an epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was an aawwssommee story, man. i loved it. 3;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The devil cannot die, Lucifer is the devil and he cannot die. Maybe he just retreated or something, but I know for sure, that the devil cannot die. But through all THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY! You are an awesome writer. Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok. i didnt see that 1 woulda known he wud actualli kiss her?The guy in the dream must ave bin rely crepy. I cant be bothered to make any connections at the moment so i think ill just carry on readin. Gud fic by the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! thats interestin. seein his own best friend and friend motha get murdered, poor kid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gud fic so far. The demon guy is so cool! he kiks ass.I feel sorri 4 the girl tho, bein controlled in the night by a lil demon then attacked or rescued wateva by a notha 1. Then asked by the demon who 'rescued' her tosave his soul. rely interestin. |