Reviews for Incomplete
StradMore chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
hm... angsty

but it was nice. the rhyming and allkeep it up!
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
although depressing, it's understandable, and that's the feeling too many people feel... it's like a sad love story... well, yeah, it is. nice work &)
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
never felt and never thought. goods anywasy
Free-Writer chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Aw! This is so sad. Great poem. I could definately tell exactly what you were saying. You are very good at that. Keep writing!
Falling Stars chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Wow.. This is sad. Really good!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
Loved it.

Heart of the Sword
Lilly Nilly chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
I love this poem. It flows well and gets the point across. I like the emotion in it too. Great job!

Lilly
not sure yet chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
very sad and sweet poem, love the last line of this one, nicely done