Reviews for Pain
StradMore chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
nice one there, especially the ending lines... made me smirk! Ha ::smirk::
GoldMetalGymnast chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
hey, thats really good, and so true!
keep writing! sorry I havent been around much, been extremely busy!
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
i like it! it's a sad subject to write about, but it's so hart-felt :) good job, jyll!
Black Rose4 chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
I love true it is...thanks for the review too. I appreciate it.

wildtenderness chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
WOW!that was REALLY great!loved the way you wrote the poem!beautifully done;)
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
Pretty intense... it's just brimming with emotion. Amazing poem, I love it.

Keep writing!
ivorysunset chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
Great poem... it really makes you think, especially those last lines.
Smarie chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
the last four lines were my favorite...all in all it was good. Review my poetry?
Lilly Nilly chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
I love this one too. There is so much emotion in it which the reader feels themselves. That is the best kind of poetry.

Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
I like what you did with this.

~Heart of the Sword
Devious Angel XDemon chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
I wish I could talk to pain! But no...anyways, I liked this poem. It was really good. Keep writing _