And once again I am awed. Really, I hope that you don't get sick of flattery easily, because if that's so, I'm sure that you're going to want to kill me by the time you're done writing this. ::grin:: I adore your humor-Kevin and Kris's bantering is wonderful to read. Your writing is divine-the dream sequence was so incredibly well-done, as was... well... Just ALL of it. Your storyline is inspired, and intriguing, and I didn't want to stop reading it so soon.

Just so you know, I really AM intrigued by the idea of this whole thing. The conversation that Kris had with the Namekeepr (ahh, I just now connected that with chapter 4, how interesting...) was VERY interesting. ::squee:: I love it.

I have two complaints, though:

1. Kevin just doesn't seem like a good name for him... -_- Probably because it always makes me think of the football-star-idiot off of Daria (as sad as that is, I know...). But that's such a piddling issue compared to the rest of this...

2. I'm a little bit confused on the issue of why the characters in the Crossroads aren't moving on to other lives, in other worlds. I got the idea in Chapter 2 that the Crossroads was kind of like... a layover in an airport, and that you'd be leaving again soon. But that didn't seem to be the case in Chapter 3. Maybe that's solely my issue, though. Or maybe it just has yet to be explained...

Oh, also, are you having someone beta-read this? I caught a few typos. Just thought you should know. ...and if you'd LIKE a beta-reader but don't know of anyone interested, do contact me. I'd be ever so happy to do it.

Anyway, this is getting rather excessively long, so I'll just say one more time that I adore this. And now I will be gone...

great job keep writing

hi!

This is hina-chan of tenshi Nekos trio!

since rekka-chan listed this as one of the favorites I decided to check it out you see. It's really really interesting!I must say, your stories are quite unique and... really different... in a really good way you see!. 'll check back later! 4 some reason, I can't stop smiling... such an amusing story... 0.- -.- -. -.0

hina, tenshi Nekos

hi!

This is hina-chan of tenshi Nekos trio!

since rekka-chan listed this as one of the favorites I decided to check it out you see. It's really really interesting!I must say, your stories are quite unique and... really different... in a really good way you see!. 'll check back later! 4 some reason, I can't stop smiling... 0.- -.- -. -.0

Wow, I'd just like to say, that the most respectable and noteworthy aspect of this story is that it's a completely original concept. I am so tired of looking at fantasy stories with 7 fate-destined princesses who are chosen to save an empire from the ravages of war. Your style is unique and I love the humor and explanation in the second chapter. It's not nearly as bad as you claim at the end of your writing. This piece, in my opinion, could definately lead somewhere. Glad I've found a writer on this site with a sense of originality. Good luck in the future, and I'll continue to check this story out.

Damn! You're just too good, you know that? You do humor, you do... I don't know what to call this. Drama? Anyway, I'm intrigued. Especially by that bit in the middle with Adrienne and Dorian (two names that I'm especially fond of, BTW _~). Anyway, keep writing this, because it's a VERY strong start, and I want to see more.

once more, very interesting, but somewhat different than ur other story...I'll be keeping my eye on this story to see where it goes.

~rekka-chan _, tenshi nekos