Reviews for Fallen
LghtAngel chapter 8 . 11/3/2003
nice story! update soon!
Starvinfemale chapter 7 . 10/9/2003
Hey, ur sory is going gooD. uPDATE SOON PLSS
Mahagony chapter 7 . 10/1/2003
so..i'm waitin for the next chapterS..i capitalized the "s" on purpose..lol
Mahagony chapter 6 . 10/1/2003
aw love...if only i still believed in it...
Katrin the Great chapter 7 . 9/25/2003
Wow, that Ginny is really a bitch for what she did to Cami. I'm glad my friends are to good to do that to me! Oh, wait...
Katrin the Great chapter 6 . 9/16/2003
Wow, the hi-C writes rather well.

Loved the ooey-gooey i-love-you-fairy-tales-come-true part, even thought it was so sappy that i wouldhave puked if i wasnt in the right mood. Cute.
aiur chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
aw kute story i lyk ur whole triangle set-up. but iz zach a player, or iz he jus tryin 2 cover up his actionz? great job, update soon!
Katrin the Great chapter 4 . 8/12/2003
Like this chapter- BAD, BAD Ginny! i mean *cough* Queenie *cough*!
Jaide DM chapter 4 . 8/10/2003
Superb, and I am awaiting the next chapter. Well, if you aren't busy, perhaps you could slip over and read my fancy love story. ::Cough.:: Cheap advertising.
Jaide DM chapter 3 . 8/10/2003
Another solid chapter. A solid, topless, chapter. Heh.
Jaide DM chapter 2 . 8/10/2003
Yes, it was rather short, but I'm not complaining. Good work, very good. I put you on Author Alert, and I think I am going to see if it will let me do it again.
Jaide DM chapter 1 . 8/10/2003
Good first chapter. I'm impressed, and it actually reminds me of the teen fiction I wrote on here. (Which you should read and review, since I am digging for readers.) I like it so far, and the massive pride joke was very funny.
grey paper star chapter 4 . 8/10/2003
jeesh. she's gotten herself into some deep shit. ha.

um, the story itself is okay. mediocre-ish-great. Kinda. I dunno. I'm just not fully attracted to it. But the plot is still really great. keep writing!
Katrin the Great chapter 3 . 7/24/2003
Lol, thanks for the plug, Queenie! And I just LOVE Cami. She's too cool, and I'm so proud of her for helping Hailey. Lol. Hold on, I just got a call- "Super-beta to the rescue!"
Katrin the Great chapter 2 . 7/20/2003
"Johnny, I get the blue puppy!" I love that line. Just makes me wonder what they were REALLY arguing about... *cough* Lol. Hm, I was thinking about the last reviewer's question about what celebrity Zach would look like... he sure sounds like Orlando Bloom to me, if Orli had curly hair... or you could just be really nice to Zach and say he looks like Johnny Depp... that's a compliment to any GUY.
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