Reviews for Chocolát
Lady B.V Rose chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Nice spin on it! your summary was very right!

Lady B.
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
This poem is really good. You write very dark poetry, but I like it. It isn't whiny or depressing, just very powerful.
Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
Hn... interesting... good stuff.
Garrett C chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
Very short, but very sweet.

Like chocolate, or better yet a forbidden fruit whose juices stain the blood and leave behind nothing of the sort which existed before.

I actually can't say anything bad here. You seem to enjoy writing, oh how do you say this... well.

Congrats on the talent.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
I liked it. Short, but it said a lot.

Heart of the Sword
unwritten chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
rather odd