Nice spin on it! your summary was very right!

Lady B. ~~

This poem is really good. You write very dark poetry, but I like it. It isn't whiny or depressing, just very powerful.

Hn... interesting... good stuff.

Very short, but very sweet.

Like chocolate, or better yet a forbidden fruit whose juices stain the blood and leave behind nothing of the sort which existed before.

I actually can't say anything bad here. You seem to enjoy writing, oh how do you say this... well.

Congrats on the talent.

I liked it. Short, but it said a lot.

~Heart of the Sword

rather odd