Reviews for The Water Spout
Earthsong12 chapter 1 . 5/23/2004
This is good. Your nephew sounds cute. _
Dark Angel The Temptress chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
awsome poem! i loved it! lmao!awsome job!
Llandyri chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
Heheh... I have a nephew like that- only not quite as old, from the sound of it. Real awesome, and true-to-life. Oh, yes. And thanks for reviewing me. :D

Tanika chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
heh... this is a good poem... i read it like a month or so ago... i thought i reviewed it... im so sorry i didnt... well i would badger you about putting stuff up for me to read... and i would compliain about my muse going to a different site and neglected some poems i put up but this is a review so i wont... hahaha i am not at home ne more im going to school in newyork now so i wont be able to get to a pc often... cause where i live thereisnt one
FattyButt chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
aw...very sad for the little one, but you always find a humorous way to look at things!

Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Lol, funny and gross at the same time. Oh well, I liked it. Keep writing.

RaspberryGirl chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
Cute! _
unforeseen chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Heh-heh. Funny. Keep writing.

PainKiller chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Eww... though it's definantely rated PG-13. This is G, maybe PG. You're pretty talented.
lil blue song bird chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
Even though I already read this on the poets board I think it should be reviewed again...Fantasticly writen; you're a talented poet.