|Reviews for My First Guy|
| Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
how sad... but great job. )
| Chen chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Lovely work... but... do you really love him?
| Mandrake-CoRn chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
This is exactly what happened when my bf broke up with me...I'm sorry :(
I was crying through this poem, it was really sad, but really good - capturing. Good job
| youguessedit chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
Ah, the simple words. All the ancient poets used extremely simple words. And when it's really broken down, much of the best poetry is very simple. And you've captured that. It's like the Greek poet said, "Pain penetrates me drop by drop." You have obviously mastered this skill. Don't let up writing poetry like this. It's an inspiration for any poet who reads it.