Reviews for Fear
secret thoughts revealed chapter 13 . 7/26/2009
a good chapter however nowhere near fit for an ending an update would be very nice
secret thoughts revealed chapter 7 . 7/26/2009
another great chapter but you have a spelling mistake in the last line. it should be mine not mind i think
secret thoughts revealed chapter 6 . 7/26/2009
Love ths chapter and the story so far. The desciption could have been a little better and included a little more emotion but still very good.
secret thoughts revealed chapter 2 . 7/26/2009
i had forgotten about this story. good chapter short but good, a definite sense of suspense building.
secret thoughts revealed chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
hi love this first chapter I have the same first name as the main character cool
Jezebel Malice chapter 12 . 9/16/2004
hello...
loverly job..
another fabulous chapter.
Damira chapter 11 . 7/26/2004
wow...
Jezebel Malice chapter 11 . 3/31/2004
mm, yummy.
i like the 'innocent child inside of myself was crying out in agony and misery' part. i dont know why, i just kind of do.
keep it up.
~jessi rose~
Dark Lalage chapter 11 . 3/30/2004
aw!
i wish u would have went farther on woth the story!
i love this story so keep writing!
lots of love and angst!
Sakuya Li chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
Great first chapter... I can't wait to get started on all ther rest... XD
I'd have to agree with NeverNeverLand on this one... I love the plot of your story... It's great! If you try and use more unique nouns/pronouns and adjectives in the story it can add to the emotions your readers are receiving from your writing... And it can add to the suspense as well...
Refer to my review on Xanga...
TTYL Kesei!
Your Friend,
~Sakuya Li~
Dark Lalage chapter 10 . 2/23/2004
the more u write on this story the more i love it keep going kat!
Cacique
Dniwmage chapter 10 . 2/21/2004
Nice story! My xanga is mainly Selece. I love this story!
drew chapter 10 . 2/20/2004
woah, compelling and sexy, i'm stuck, i must know more! you'll do great in life, i guarantee it, just keep up the good work!
drew chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
that was a great, compelling story, i would like to read more, i have nothing but time, so i can read all you want me to! send me an email telling me which of your stories and poems you would like me to read, and your generosity would be greatly appreciated. this story put me in your character's place, and led me through every step, every breath of your journey, so arigato for letting me read your stuff!
Signed,
Drew (uyu)
Jezebel Malice chapter 10 . 1/3/2004
oh...vampire lovin'...interesting
i really like this fic.
i look forward to your updates.
_ ~jessi~
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