Reviews for THE HOLY BIBLE
Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
OMG! I LUV THIS! I love how you express your love for God, he's my King too! : Keep them coming.

-Shasta Valentine
Stephenie Wilcox chapter 1 . 6/25/2004 could be Islamic too: the Quar'an (did I spell that correctly?) is like an Islamic Bible. Anyway, I liked the poem!
sevthewriter chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
Hey that's pretty good. I wrote a religious acrostic too. It definitely challenges you to select the right words and phrasing to make it flow. I think you did well.
joie 610 chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
ah, religion. beautiful, and also...

hmm, yes. nice poem! i know what that's like, except instead of the bible, it's the divine principle (yep, i'm a 2nd gen blessed child).

good job!
Nightmare Girl chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
WOW! I think it really great that you put your religion out ther! Jesus Rules! Keep up the good work!

Rock on- B.F.P.
Callipher chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
It'll be great with every christian sees the Bible the way you see it. Can I show this to the youths under my charge? Will you mind?
rstarbreeze chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
If you belive this much in the Bible I hope you don't eat shrip, lobster or crab. The Bible states that if you eat anything from the sea that does not have fins and scales that you are commiting an abomination against God. (Leviticus 11:11)

It states in Leviticus 21:21 that someone with any kind of defect in sight, body or mind may not approach the alter of God, because they are unpure. Does this mean that if you wear glasses, you are unpure, and may not approch the alter of God?

What about all of that? I will not lecuter you or say you are wrong to belive in God, but should the Bible be taken so literaly?
naturalgirl chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
I think it was very good don't stop writing about your religion, I too write songs. Also thank you for giving me my first review on my story, The Secret Story.
suthka chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
::blinks:: may the gods take pity your soul...
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
Very nice work.

~Heart of the Sword
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 7/17/2003
A&W: wo...

dunno wat u talk about...

but...sounds cool...

good job girl!




Evy: cool...

Best poem ever...! Kep writing...

Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
I loved it! It's great to meet yet another Christian on the site! Excellent excellent work!