That's really odd, but good. Is it the diamonds talking? You don't really resolve that mystery. And the hehehe and the end kinda lowers the tone abit.
How did you find me on fictionpress? I find my peoples by reviewers, if they review i look at their stuff. Also, peoples favs lists. Lots of good stuff on there. If that doesn't work, i review for peoples that i find when i search at random and hope they review back. Works for me. You don't seem to have a lack of reviews though. _
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~Elbereth141~

Pretty good, prayer for pity is my favorite but this was good also. It was sort of hard to read but that made it all the more interesting. Great work.

P.S.

About reviews, you said you wanted an anwer, you just have to start slow, review other people and hopefully they'll review you too.

P.S.S.

You're doing great work, keep it up, you're on my fav's authors list!

Sounds like the first one. Its cool though.

~Siran Awel

im not particularily fond of it, but maybe someone else is. im also in a a pissy mood. its not thats it shows no talent, just the stlye doenst appeal. keep writing though.